Figured I’d go and rewrite this. I’m going to break up the pacing and write everything a bit better and make it more believable.
Old chapters will be available if you do end up wanting to read them for some reason.
without further ado, here they are.
Re: Don’t Pull Her Out – Chapter 1
If you want to edit, let me know. I’d very much like someone to edit these before I send it to the wolves.